I sit up in bed
As click clacking claws cross the floor
A rumble grumble
And shadows swirling by the door.
Under the covers
Thumping my heart beats in my head,
My eyes are closed tight
Something slithers under the bed.
I have just one chance
I grip my trick-or-treat bag tight
Throw down my candy
As I leap with all of my might.
You may laugh at me
But monsters are real I must warn
For here is my proof:
It ate all of the candy corn!
The evidence, my dear Watson, is purely circumstantial. Unless, of course, it was your candy corn that was stolen. Nice story! Good luck in the contest!
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LOL-Funny and clever, Matthew! Good luck π
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That monster would be in trouble if it ate all of my candy corn. π Good luck!
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Oh no! He ate ALL the candy-corn! Very clever and funny.
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So cute. Good job.
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Great story…the proof is in the candy corn! π Good luck with this!
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Great job, Matthew. I love your pacing and rhyme. Best of luck in Susanna’s fun contest!
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Gotta watch those monsters! Good job & good luck.
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Just the amount of tension and anticipation that children love! I love it, too!
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Candy corn is best given to monsters, so I hear. Good luck with the contest!
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Wow! what a pig monster…glad you got away.
like your word choices.
good luck!
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Matthew, love the tension and the rhyme.
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Fun story!
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Thanks for the fun story! Good luck!
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You’ve set a really nice tone with such a spare text. Well done!
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Matthew, I love the suspense and the ending!
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Excellent story. I could feel your character’s fear. Good luck!
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Great job, Matthew! Fun story! Imagine having to sacrifice your candy to escape the monster! π Thanks so much for joining in the Halloweensie fun!
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